A Collection of Original Poetry by Students of Ladysmith High School

Tuesday, 22 September 2015

Two Poems ~ Mohammed Jamil


The orange sunrise
lifts the veil of Night and wakes
Day from it's slumber.


The warning of the dead

The dead whisper and warn the living
longing for what once belonged to them.


The living pay no heed
to the warnings
and they live their lives
making the same mistake
as their predecessors
continuing the cycle
of life and death.

©  Mohammed Jamil

Grade 10


  1. Your philosophy is very true and so eloquently stated. Humans have a hard time understanding that they are like others. Thanks. K.

  2. You see with clear eyes - I love your opening lines especially.


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