A Collection of Original Poetry by Students of Ladysmith High School

Thursday, 17 September 2015

Sevenling (I Hate Only 3 Things) ~ Gugu Buthelezi

I hate only 3 things
NASA, fair-weather
and rockets.


"Enjoy" being launched,
shoulders cold from summer snow
And going into space.


But nobody really cares...




© Gugu Buthelezi




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Grade 10
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3 comments:

  1. This is odd, and it's that very oddness that makes it appealing to me.

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  2. I absolutely love this piece. The Sevenling is one of my favorite forms, and you have done it so much justice here. I've chosen your piece as inspiration for my own.

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  3. Yes, its originality makes this poem stand out.

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