A Collection of Original Poetry by Students of Ladysmith High School

Thursday, 17 September 2015

Scorched ~ Raisha Ramkhelawan

When you looked at me
With blue eyes so deep
Piercing my soul with a glacier
That is my heart
With a knife forged from the
Fires of your love



When you touched me;
My senses exploded into a flurry of
butterflies
intensifying my love
The flames raging from red to blue
in the fire of your heart
The pieces of our puzzle joined
melted into place by the fires
of our love



I felt a burning in me
For the fire you've ignited
in my heart
has stained my soul with the
scorching flames of your love




©  Raisha Ramkhelawan




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Grade 10
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1 comment:

  1. The intensity of emotion comes through clearly in this poem.

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