A Collection of Original Poetry by Students of Ladysmith High School

Thursday, 17 September 2015

Like a Visionary ~ Anonymous

Like a visionary
you stepped out of my sweetest dreams
no words in a dictionary
could describe how your eyes shine brighter than beams.



Like the moon holds onto day
your love holds on to me
like the leaves fall in may
I fall for you... if I may say



I love you like the stars
love the moon
I long for you like the
sea longs for the shore



you are my God
and I am your nun!




Anonymous




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Grade 11
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1 comment:

  1. I like the comparison "like the stars love the moon", and, especially, "you are my God. I am your nun." That is very original.

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