A Collection of Original Poetry by Students of Ladysmith High School

Thursday, 17 September 2015

Time ~ Kaylin Bhawanibheek

If I could save time in a bottle,
The first thing that I would do,
Is save every day, until eternity passes away,
Just to spend them with you.

I'd cherish you, Love, as I always do,
Simply because you complete me,
As the snow does the winter and the sun the summer,
You are everything to me.

We will grow old,
And time will pass hurriedly,
That I know.

I just want you to always remember that;
To me your beauty is infinite,
And I'll always love you no matter what.

©  Kaylin Bhawanibheek
With words quoted from Time in a Bottle by Jim Croce

Grade 11

1 comment:

  1. I love those lines of Jim Croce's too. Was so happy to read them here. And then you continued with a beautiful statement of devotion. Very nice.


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