A Collection of Original Poetry by Students of Ladysmith High School

Thursday, 17 September 2015

Our Meaning ~ Anonymous

As I look into your eyes
I see a thousand angels singing harmoniously
amongst the background of fluttering stars.
This seduces me closer as dark to mysterious night.


And so when you, mi amor, and I
come together in a conjoined definition of love
my heart grieves as he knows it is not infinite.


But sorrow and grieve is destroyed
As I feel your succulent lips upon my cheek
This my love is our meaning of loves peak.


Anonymous


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Grade 11
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1 comment:

  1. An interesting awareness that, even at love's peak, the narrator is wise enough to know it is not infinite. A thoughtful write.

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