A Collection of Original Poetry by Students of Ladysmith High School

Tuesday, 14 October 2014

Michaela Tommy ~ Drowning

How do I
know that what i do feel
is real ? My entire world is caving
into me, drowning, lost in the sea of madness
my cries of help unheard, silently
I sink to the bottom
unnoticed.

© Michaela Tommy


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GRADE 10
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1 comment:

  1. Your metaphor is very strongly felt in this poem, Michaela and the form serves you well in creating a concentration of emotions.

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