A Collection of Original Poetry by Students of Ladysmith High School

Tuesday, 21 October 2014

Jivana Reddy ~ As the Sun Dawns

As the sun dawns
I see your face
It feels like I’m reborn

We fly away to the unknown
I think it’s just a love case
As the sun dawns

A new world we are shown
But, why at such a pace ?
It feels like I’m reborn

Now you are gone
Sadly, I feel this sudden grace
As the sun dawns


© Jivana Reddy

1 comment:

  1. This is a very graceful poem, Jivana. The mood is light but there is a touch of sadness too.

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